On Monday I came across this big tower and I was concerned. The next day I went to the tower and there was a big door, and it was open I went in it but there was so much spider web that i couldn’t see all the way on top, there was this big ladder going up and there was a big light that looks like its for the 18s I turn and its started Flashed at me an boom it was so bright that my eyes were blind for a Minutes, It came in my head that it was a light house.
Bray,
Your narrator seems to be a curious and brave character to go exploring into the unknown. I could picture the blinding moment. Good details
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA