week#12 100 word challenge

One day a boy was travelling with his dad. They were going to Pakistan. The plane had some turbulence on the way and the plane started to shake faster and faster and then all of Sudden  the plane started to go down the dad looked at the window they were over water and a big splash the son was fine and the dad to. A flight attendant could ever one to get off the plane and into the inflatable rough they were in the middle of the ocean they were stranded for 6 weeks he felt really ill after the ocean.

2 thoughts on “week#12 100 word challenge”

  1. Dear Bray,
    I like the way you worked the prompt into your story. As I read, I was hopeful all would be ok in the end.
    Keep writing!
    Mrs. Silver
    Team 100
    IL, USA

  2. Hi Bray,
    Well done on your entry this week. Don’t forget to use punctuation in your writing as this helps the reader get meaning from your story. I’m glad the characters in your story survived the crash.
    Keep up the great idea.

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